Dream ,dream, dream , a immense world with mighty things.Bam! the Bright ball zooms at my face, crack!, My blue hockey stick terminates the dazzling ball which you can’t see anymore.So I sauntered of the feild to find something else to acheive.I suddenly see a destitute man and help him .Zap! I am with captain america and he is fighting and demolishing Iron man ,Iron man quickly fights back boom, Iron man smashes Captain america into the wall WHAT I come flying in from the side and terminates Iron man. CRACK! wake up from this whacky dream.
Hey ethan
ReplyDeleteNice story I like how you have used previous words of the week in your story. One correction you need to make is when you have a space then a full stop. One question what does CRACK| stand for? Come check out my blog @ https://sscolem.blogspot.co.nz
Hey ethan
ReplyDeleteNice story I like how you have used previous words of the week in your story. One correction you need to make is when you have a space then a full stop. One question what does CRACK| stand for? Come check out my blog @ https://sscolem.blogspot.co.nz
7/6/16
ReplyDeleteHi Ethan
I like your story but one thing is that you have some punctuation to add to it. Otherwise great!
Tina
Hey Ethan
ReplyDeleteNice story. Really descriptive. Next time you might want to check your spelling and punctuation. Otherwise it was great. Please come and check out my blog at http://sstanikan.blogspot.co.nz/
Thanks Tanika